My copy was waiting for me when I got home. I've only just opened it (been busy sorting out a few things on the latest Zenwalk this evening) so had no more than a quick thrash through.
Not had time to read anything properly but purely as regards presentation, I think you've done a grand job. I love the up-to-date "in your face" look and it's amazing how much impact a small thing like changing the Linux Format logo on the cover from white to black has - and a neat little touch to slice off the top right-hand side of the U to fit in alongside the X.
Great stuff, chaps.
Could have done without the embarrassment of my Pipepanic woes being dragged up again though.
However, must say I'm getting better at this sort of thing. One of my tasks with Zenwalk this evening was to add an Xfce menu entry for xine (installed last night) under the Multimedia section - successfully accomplished.